Starbase Short Stories

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#1
I'm a high schooler and my first language happens to be anything but English. I sometimes do short stories to warm up for the real thing in school*. Here's some of mine.**

*If some of these stories are horrible and awful to read, I'm sorry. I don't edit them much, they're all written in about an hour. I'm also not a writer. Just bored.

**If you're not on the discord server for Starbase, just to clarify, all the characters are named after moderators, including the main character, Frey. However, all of these are fictional stories that are not meant to be representative of the moderators in question. AND NO THESE AREN'T FAN FICS.

Frey's Monday https://docs.google.com/document/d/12gIufGg1__Ti2QC2hljLnXTtNULSpNWfKF4EUlUqOjk/edit?usp=sharing

Frey's Tuesday https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qqGJF3ipHQ5mKDLWQmxbNIRfCJlTsXWkZudsxu5eiGc/edit?usp=sharing

Frey's Wednesday https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iIUkTc_JhoHYt3VpU1WSLzXFQ1GypZmWxwgw91v7zdA/edit?usp=sharing

Frey's Thursday (Ridiculous Edition) (I didn't take it seriously) (gone wrong) (in the hood) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D-US1dSbgUjoy1SbeuIhzRnrDSw8Xva_FH8BoB4Vcyk/edit?usp=sharing

If yall have any starbase short stories of your own, please post them! I'd like to read a good short story from time to time. Also, feedback is highly appreciated.
 

Mito

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#4
I'm a high schooler and my first language happens to be anything but English. I sometimes do short stories to warm up for the real thing in school*. Here's some of mine.**

*If some of these stories are horrible and awful to read, I'm sorry. I don't edit them much, they're all written in about an hour. I'm also not a writer. Just bored.

**If you're not on the discord server for Starbase, just to clarify, all the characters are named after moderators, including the main character, Frey. However, all of these are fictional stories that are not meant to be representative of the moderators in question. AND NO THESE AREN'T FAN FICS.

Frey's Monday https://docs.google.com/document/d/12gIufGg1__Ti2QC2hljLnXTtNULSpNWfKF4EUlUqOjk/edit?usp=sharing

Frey's Tuesday https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qqGJF3ipHQ5mKDLWQmxbNIRfCJlTsXWkZudsxu5eiGc/edit?usp=sharing

Frey's Wednesday https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iIUkTc_JhoHYt3VpU1WSLzXFQ1GypZmWxwgw91v7zdA/edit?usp=sharing

Frey's Thursday (Ridiculous Edition) (I didn't take it seriously) (gone wrong) (in the hood) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D-US1dSbgUjoy1SbeuIhzRnrDSw8Xva_FH8BoB4Vcyk/edit?usp=sharing

If yall have any starbase short stories of your own, please post them! I'd like to read a good short story from time to time. Also, feedback is highly appreciated.
Everytime i come back i wish i hadnt discovered the forum >;) awesome job either way
 

Vloshko

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#11
I don't edit them much
That's good, personally, I don't even look at what I write, with the intention of editing until at least a month later for creative projects. It's a good practice to keep.

  • "One final sweepover" - you should change the word sweepover, if English was your main language I would add: exercise "poetic control.
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D the AFK parts in Monday and Tuesday.
 

DrunkRussianBear

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#12
That's good, personally, I don't even look at what I write, with the intention of editing until at least a month later for creative projects. It's a good practice to keep.

  • "One final sweepover" - you should change the word sweepover, if English was your main language I would add: exercise "poetic control.
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View attachment 183 D the AFK parts in Monday and Tuesday.
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