I like the visual aspect of it.
But it wouldn't be me without spotting some possible improvements.
1. Last line could be divided into two: manufacturer and designer
2. All those tiny PD turrets that are in group of 2 will limit each other line of fire. They are also easier targets because of it. Would be beneficial to spread them around or merge into fewer but bigger turrets.
3. Easy to flank from top or bottom, due to all turrets being prone to gimbal lock from that direction. Placing some on the sides could remove the problem.
4. Those frontal side pods are not reflected on the top-down mini layout. Neither is the very front extrusion.
5. In thrust power I'd use the same units both for base value and variation. So 1600k +-20k. Or just skip the variation altogether, as it's 1.25% so irrelevant.
Hope you don't mind some constructive criticism